Have No Fear, The Villain Is Here!

In many films today, there is almost always a controversy between what we agree with and what we do not. Although, what do you do when the character we are led to believe in, is actually a villain in disguise? When things begin to go dark when we thought all was bright. You may begin to switch with the theme, or you may remain empathetic to the evil-doer. No need to fear, that does not make you evil, the producers of the films will purposely direct your emotions to sympathize with those of the bad guy. Using this knowledge I will be discussing the film “The Place Beyond the Pines”, and it's portrayed main characters Avery Cross (Bradley Cooper) and Luke Glanton (Ryan Gosling). I will be discussing how the producers have led their audience to feel pity, sorrow, and even anger for the “bad guy”. Maybe he is not so ‘bad’ after all.

This story begins with the life of Luke Glanton. As a motorcycle stuntman, travel was a huge part of his career. Yet, once he arrives in Schenectady, New York, he is reunited with a woman from the past, a woman who he later discovers he shares a son with. Fearing the title of a “deadbeat dad”, Luke will do anything in his power to be involved in his son’s life in some form. By quitting his job as a motorcyclist, he is able to attempt to support his son. Afterwards, he takes up a job with a man at a local auto repair shop and tries to squeeze into the lives of his ex; Romina Gutierrez, and their son. After countless rejections from Romina regarding his financial support, he becomes desperate. Asking his employer for a raise, Luke sets out on the situation of a lifetime that he never would have thought he would land himself in. The character of Bradley Cooper is brought into the film on some seriously inconvenient circumstances. Avery Cross is part of the NYPD, and is also the murderer of Luke Glanton. Fast forward a few years, and the “good guy” remains as someone the audience hates, but the characters adore. The criminal who has died is someone the characters of the film believe to be the terror of the town that was finally solved, whereas the viewers know the deceased’s true intentions.

The producers of “The Place Beyond The Pines” do an adequate job at forcing the audience to feel nothing but pity for Ryan Gosling’s character. As a victim of a deadbeat father, all his character wants is to be a part of his child’s life by not making the same mistakes his father did. He gets his life together by quitting the job he loves, realizing how dangerous it is, and how much time he would spend away from his family. Getting a new, local, well paid job is Luke’s second step into his son’s life. The money he receives from every paycheck would go towards childcare, to insure his son has a good life. How could you hate a man like that? Later realizing that what he is bringing to the table is not enough, Luke asks his employer for a simple raise, not realizing that this source of income would be what ends his life, and begins the wrath of his son’s. As the audience, we wonder how things will turn out, will his son respect his drastic decisions? Or hate him for his criminal behavior? Several years later, Jason, a troubled teen curious about his biological father, becomes enraged by his discoveries, but it is not what we think. When Aj Cross enters Jason’s life, the secret is soon revealed: Jason’s father was dead because of Avery Cross, Aj’s father. Using these aspects, the producers have created a base for the audience. We feel empathy for not only Luke, who had been murdered in an act of unlawful money “exchange”, but for the son who was forced to grow without a father to guide and love him. Simply because Luke had gotten involved in some illegal business of bank robbery, the NYPD believed it suitable to shoot and kill him, unarmed, and surrendering. The police officer becomes the true antagonist of the film. Praised for his duties that “benefitted the community”, the audience begins to despise this man, while feeling sorry for the known criminal and his family.

The “protagonist”, Avery Cross, is made so that the viewers are forced not to feel any pride in his doings. By the gloating and positive praise he receives for murder, one cannot help but think he enjoys the attention. He is given medals and badges for killing a man who wanted nothing but to provide for his son. As if this was not enough, the man he killed was surrendering when he shot him by accident inside a family's home. After being shot, Luke had fired back at Avery, who later tells police that Luke had shot his gun first resulting in him firing back in defense, ending his life. Although the man feels remorse for what he has done, the audience cannot help but wish it would have been him who had died back in that house. With a son of his own, one would assume Cross would understand the pain it must have caused Luke’s family, but instead the man becomes just a shadow in the background of his own son’s life. This results in his son being brought up for drug possession with a friend, who is later revealed as Luke’s son, Jason. Once Avery realizes this, he forbids his son from speaking to him, fearing what he may do if he knows what he has done to his family. Nevertheless, his son continues to speak to the forbidden boy. Jason discovers his father’s past through his step-dad, who tells him his name, and the internet. After visiting Luke’s former employer, he is shown all he needs to know about his biological father, including a picture of the man who murdered him. While maintaining a friendship with Aj Cross, Jason notices a photograph in Aj’s home, the same photo that was in a newspaper article about his father’s death. Once Jason has placed two and two together, he lashes out by beating his former friend at gunpoint, then dragging Avery Cross out into the woods where he intends to murder him to avenge his father. While he prepares to shoot and kill the man who deprived him of a father, Jason has a change of heart and instead steals Avery’s wallet which held a special photograph, and runs away. When Jason is gone, he purchases a motorcycle, similar to the one his father once drove, and drives away. Back at his home in New York, a few months later his mother receives an envelope from her son, inside is the photograph, one of them along with Luke, dated back when Jason was just a baby.

By the final plots of the film, the majority of the audience is in tears. We realize the kind of life Jason would have had, attempting to grow as a boy without his father. The sympathy we feel for Luke Glanton and his family is over the moon, and the little remorse we feel for Avery Cross, even after he breaks down in apology, is just one example of the amazing job the producers had in making this a film for the “bad guy”.

Love and Loss

Dear Diary,

Today is the date I will mourn for an eternity. My beautiful daughter, mother, and wife have been ripped from my palms, and even though each has left me with special reminders of life and the love we shared, I cannot help but cry. Nefertiti was my love, my life, my everything, and now she has been taken from me. For what purpose? I am not certain. She has been my amazing companion for years, raising our children alongside the many minor wives, like Kia, I have held, but none have ever compared to her beauty and elegance. We shared a special religious belief, she was my equal in the eyes of Aten. This is a moment that will forever stick in mind, no matter how much time will pass, I will never recover from such a loss…

I reach towards the Aten, begging him for mercy. How could this have happened? How could he take away my precious Wife and child? I have to hold my tongue. I must not speak harshly of the God. His plan for me is unclear, but I am aware that there is a purpose for what has happened. Perhaps, he found I paid too much attention to my family, that I have neglected my duties to him. There is only room enough in my heart to love and worship one being; Aten has made that clear with his extinction of my love. He will now be all I love. That must have been his plan. I must take my grief and use it for him. I was foolish to have thought the change of my birth name from “Amenhotep IV” to “Akhenaten”, in his honor would be sufficient to giving my full oath to serving the sun God. If only the beings from above would reach down and provide me aid with such dramatic news…

For the sake of the life we have shared, I must take this loss and turn it to love for the Aten. The God will see me through the hard times, and I will see to it that he is worshipped in the proper manner he deserves. All of Egypt will pray the name of the sun God, no other impostering Gods will be so much as thought of by my people. I will make point of it.

Akhenaten

The Dauntless Dream

Every bookworm’s dream is to have the opportunity to become a character from their favourite novel, I am no exception. If given the chance to become any character my heart desired, I would trade places with Tris Prior, formerly known as Beatrice, from the Divergent trilogy by Veronica Roth. The chance to live the life of a dauntless would be breathtaking for me, with all the bravery involved, and the skill. She is more than just that though, as a Divergent, she is selfless, brave, and curious; all human skills that I dream of possessing.

For as long as I can remember, taking risks was something I adored doing. The adrenaline that would flow through my veins as I performed tasks that seemed rather dangerous, or out of my comfort zone, was a feeling that made me feel alive. Living the life of a Dauntless which, by definition means fearless or bold, would be a lifestyle to satisfy this aspect of myself. As someone who fears many things that are common in everyday life, for instance, heights, crowded places, dolls, loud noises, and occasionally clowns, possessing the abilities to face all of this would be fascinating. My biggest regret in my life so far, is not confronting the fears that have held me back my entire life. Being Tris would make all of this go away. I could climb ferris wheels and not look back; and dare to be whoever I want, how ever I wanted, without the judgement of others. There is no more of a perfect world than the ones we read in books. Time is an endless cycle, and the fears of wasting it do not exist. Not only would I be brave to it’s greatest extent, but I could help people in a way that does not require several degrees in medical science, or correctional courses, in a way that only requires two hands and a voice.

Defending the rights of others is something I have been extremely passionate about for as long as I could remember. As a dauntless, no one ever questions your judgement or your right to speak your mind, there are no rules except, do not be a coward. You are the law, and whether you use that power or abuse it, really depends on your intentions. To have that influence over the thoughts of others would be a dangerous power to hold, nevertheless, if it is put into the right hands, great things could happen. There are some negative aspects that could come along with this kind of society, but just the entire lifestyle of fighting for the people appeals to me on so many levels. Manifestos are a large part of the Divergent trilogy, and the Dauntless’ beliefs are some that I encourage daily: “We believe: that sometimes it is necessary to fight for peace; that justice is more important than peace; in denying fear the power to influence our decisions; in shouting for those who can only whisper, in defending those who cannot defend themselves; in ordinary acts of bravery, in the courage that drives one person to stand up for another.” (From the Dauntless Manifesto). For me, the most important of these is the final two statements. All my life I have been brought up to defend those who cannot defend themselves, and to stand up for others, as well as what I believe in. The life that Tris of Divergent lives may not be the most desirable life, but it is an eventful one, with moments that hold so much bravery that I cannot help but desire it.

The experiences that Tris Prior gets to live through are timeless. Before the bad comes in, her life is one filled with the excitement of simply living. That is something that I dream of understanding, to enjoy the way you spend your time solely because there is a beat in your chest, and air in your lungs. My greatest fear is that when I am old and grey, I will look back on my life with nothing but disappointment of the things I did not do. Tris Prior would not do that. I want to face my fears, and not only speak up for what I believe in, but shout to the highest mountains when things are not right. Beatrice was a girl much like myself, afraid with that feeling of not belonging. She could barely look in a mirror without seeing the things she disliked of herself. Although, Tris is nothing like that. She is fearless, nonchalant, nothing can bring her down, and most importantly, she is brave. Tris kicked Beatrice Prior out the window, and that is what I hope to do with my current self. Being able to conquer my own demons is the first step I will have to take to be anything like what the woman she is, but it is something I would love to do. The novel Divergent is my favourite trilogy, I could read it countless times and remain just as in love as I was the first time my eyes scanned the pages. Still, to this day, three reads of the trilogy later, I yearn to live as courageously as they do.

I have dreamt many nights of the life of a Dauntless, and if I had the opportunity there is no doubt in my mind that I would take it. The bravery and adrenaline that it all takes is something I thirst for. As well, all of the characteristics, that are far from the kind of person I am today, are something that makes me wonder how the life of a Dauntless would be. Everything that this trilogy possesses has a component of my dream lifestyle. If I was given the choice, I would definitely trade with “Tris” from Divergent.

The Five Best Novels

When we look around us today, there are many issues that need to be addressed. Whether it be through public service announcements, newspaper articles, or even novels specially designed for these reasons; we always find a way to bring them to the public eye. We all have those books, maybe childhood favourites or not, we’re talking about the books we could read over and over, and never get tired of them. With this knowledge, I am going to discuss from my perspective, the five best novels. As a scale of how to judge what is best, I will consider how real the issue discussed is, and how urgently they are addressed, as well as how touching the notions in the novels were to my own emotions. 

#5: Thirteen Reasons Why by Jay Asher-

Following the story of one Clay Jensen, an average teen with the stress of school, and crushes, Jay Asher takes us inside, to the parts of Clay that no one sees. After his classmate and crush, Hannah Baker commits suicide, Clay is shocked to receive a series of cassette tapes, recorded by her, two weeks later. On the tapes, it is depicted that there are thirteen reasons why Hannah Baker chose to end her life, and he is one of them.

This tragic story makes its audience aware of the countless ways we can affect a person’s life, without realizing it. It shows everyone that what you say or do can have a massive impact on someone else, in both positive and negative ways. There are several reasons this novel deserves to be on this list. For instance, it tackles an extreme problem in society, and allows the readers to become educated in the different minds of others. In some cases, it may even help others who are in the same situation as the main characters. This story may help to understand that they are not alone, and that things can get better. You may wonder, “why is this #5 if it’s so good?”, well, although the story is heart wrenching, and a complete representation of a huge issue we face often, it did not meet my criteria of “an amazing book”.

Do not get me wrong, it was a fantastic read, but there were certain aspects of the novel that just did not sit with me. One for instance, is the fact that the entire plot revolves around the idea that a teenage girl killed herself, because of the opinions of her classmates. Yes, this could be a good learning opportunity, yet, it almost makes the entire issue a joke or a game in a sense. The other reason that this novel remains on my #5, is because of the entire malevolence of the plot. Asher makes it almost impossible to feel any form of pity for the character. While reading, all I could think of is how angry Hannah Baker seemed. She never once asked for help, all she did was blame everyone else for her unhappiness, and for idiotic reasons as well. It was as if she killed herself only to make others suffer. This message, is not really one I would like to promote to the fragile minds of teenagers.

#4: Rules by Cynthia Lord-

Being a Children’s literature book, you may wonder how this has gotten on my list, nevertheless, let me explain. This riveting story follows the life of a twelve year old girl, Catherine, who has been given the task of babysitting her eight-year-old brother, David. We then learn that this is the norm in Catherine’s life, because her brother is in fact autistic, and needs to be monitored at all times. Soon, things in Catherine’s life take a turn for the optimistic as she learns new things about her brother and children like him.

This is definitely a novel I recommend highly. It covers the topic of the mental illnesses that are not usually discussed as often as others. Autism has affected many people, including me. Living with an autistic brother is far from easy, and from my perspective, this story expresses the challenges well. For anyone of any age, who may be struggling with autism, whether it be in your family or your friend’s, I would have to say this book will open your eyes. The illnesses that are not really talked about are the ones that affect your brain most, the ones that others describe as “retarded”. Although this story is one of my personal favourites, it remains on my #4, simply for the reason that I enjoyed other novels more, and it is in fact a children’s story. Overall, it is an easy to read story, with some heart warming traits that may bring a tear to your eye, and knowledge to your mind. If you are someone who may refer to people with mental illnesses as “retarded”, I suggest that you pick this story up at your local library, and read it. Use this to take a moment to open your mind to other possibilities.

#3: Hold Still by Nina LaCour-

Following the death of her best friend Ingrid, the main character, Caitlin struggles to move forward. When she finds Ingrid’s journal beneath her bed, she begins along a path of discovery, and understanding that leads her to new friendships and love. After going against herself for so long, she begins to see why some things happen for a reason.

“Hold Still” may seem like just another novel that tells the story of loss, but Nina LaCour takes this to new heights. In this story filled with heartbreak and new beginnings, the readers will without a doubt feel the very real impact suicide can have on not only one, but multiple people. As a massive global issue, suicide is a topic rarely discussed verbally. Using literature to approach the minds of those who may be considering such a fate, is an efficient way to address it. It opens doors for conversations that many try to avoid. By addressing these issues on mental illness, especially in this novel, we are telling those individuals that there are other ways. This story is full of quotes that can do nothing except make the reader think. One example would be “If you are looking for reasons there are no reasons.” once you really think about it, that one line has a great impact.

#2: Messenger by Lois Lowry-

Part three of “The Giver” series, it is already clear that this novel is one for the books. The story is one about a young boy named Matty and his adventure of understanding his mysterious gift. While his village goes into minor chaos as a growing group of citizens protest to close its borders, the Forest that was once welcoming and beautiful, begins to turn dark and malevolent. As the trees thicken, making residents unwilling to pass through, with the help of Matty, his caregiver, Seer, must travel through the Forest to return his daughter home before it’s too late. Throughout the journey, Matty must do all he can to make sure he, his caregiver and his daughter arrive safely.

"Messenger" is definitely a novel I would recommend to any teenager. Lois Lowry follows the very real issue of finding yourself; something everyone has or will experience. You will be an emotional wreck by the end of this short book, although it is more because the story is so beautifully done than sorrow. With diverse characters, and an intriguing plot, you will find it difficult to put this book down, even after the pages are finished. Anyone can find ways to relate to this story, whether it be to the characters, or even just to the entire theme. I will not spoil anything for anyone who may want the opportunity to read this for themselves, but I will say, there is something in this story for everyone. The novel is short, but Lois Lowry found a way to portray her characters without much development, and still leave me satisfied in the end.  Using magical power to reveal new identities, this book is seriously one everyone needs to read.

#1: Looking for Alaska by John Green-

Splitting the story into two parts, before and after, we already know that this cannot be good, yet, it is. As an outcast, friendless teen, Miles Halter finds his happiness in famous last words. As the dying poet, Francois Rabelais had said, he went to seek a Great Perhaps. In order to do so, Miles decides to switch to a boarding school in Alabama for his junior year, that he believes holds something more for him. Later, when he meets the fascinating Alaska Young, he realizes he was right.

I have been a huge fan of literature for as long as I can remember, and I must say, a book has never touched me as much as John Green’s “Looking for Alaska”. As a very impatient person there is nothing I hate more than subtlety, or “beating around the bush”; John Green avoids this altogether in this novel. The beauty in Green’s work is that there is nothing hidden in his message. If a character has issues, we are aware of this, and if a character dies, we usually know exactly what happens. He has a real talent for creating characters that everyone will love, and relate to in some way. For me, that is the best aspect a novel can have: the ability to put yourself in the character’s shoes, and understand their way of thinking. Now, this story is unlike any other of John Green’s, he creates a character that few may completely understand, but in the end, he leaves us almost confused and unanswered in various ways. The conflicts faced in this story are full of love and crushes, as well as the true depression of life. It is clear that he has no issue with showing the plain reality of the world, to his readers, and that is what I admire most of this piece of writing.

All in all, each story referred to in this assignment has a special place in my heart. I believe they are by far, the top five novels I have ever read in my lifetime. It is highly that I recommend every lover of books to read atleast one of these fantastic stories. I promise, you will not be disappointed.

Three Grammar Writing Exercises.

Exercise #1:

1. The team won its game. Did you win yours, too?
2. They left their books there.
3. I hear you're about to graduate.
4. It's nice that they're friendly.
5. Although I get a lot of colds, I feel all right now.
6. Who's prettier than you?
7. Are you tired? I'm out of breath, too.
8. Run back and forth from here to there.
9. You're about to lose your book.
10. Everyone will accept the prize except you.
11. Do you know whether or not he will give me the prize?
12. Many people choose to live in large cities.
13. Is the doctor through with my exam?
14. What effect does the school principal have on you?
15. What did he advise you to do? Did you take his advice?
16. There are a lot of your friends in the boat.
17. I will buy a book by Ray Bradbury.

Exercise #2:

Exercuse #3:

Time Capsule

If given the opportunity to present five items to be placed in a time capsule that would be opened in 100 years, I would choose an iPhone 5c, my favourite book, a bottle of maple syrup, Canadian change, and a photograph. I believe these items are an important part of our lives as Canadians, and that they should be shared with the eventual world.

My first choice would be an iPhone 5c. Currently, this is the technology that I use most in my life. I feel this is an important thing to add to the time capsule because it would give the people of the future a glimpse into the lives of the people of 2016. An iPhone is one of the most popular forms of entertainment today, it could show how technology has developed. We want this approaching society to understand what was significant to us today. For instance, the use of apps involving weather forecasts, online payments, health apps, anything and everything, right at the palm of our hand. There is so much important information, within such a small device, from all over the world, that it would be important for the future to see. In my opinion, the future will either hold amazing things, with new technology, and this would show what once was, and how we got to where we are in 2116. Although, there is also the chance that the future will hold chaos, if this becomes the case, the openers of this capsule will see where we were today, and hopefully understand where it all went wrong.

Another way I would show those of the future the typical life of a Canadian citizen would be through maple syrup. Kept in a freezer, it will last forever, just like the memories it holds. Being a huge part of all of our lives, I believe it is only necessary to show the future our delicacy. We can never be certain that syrup will even exist in 100 years, we can not even say trees will exist, or even humanity. Yet, if it so happens that we survive, it would be important to show one of the things we are known for most: maple. The maple leaf is a part of our lives as a Canadian in many ways, it is on our flag, everywhere. Future residents may not understand the true power of the maple leaf, and its complexity. With this addition to the time capsule, we can attempt to give them an idea of this part of our lives.

Money is changing everyday: it’s worth, it’s look. It would be important to add this to our time capsule because in 100 years time, money may not exist, and the symbols presented on our change may not be significant then. History is always important to anyone’s life, giving the future an idea of our most precious symbols now, may be good for their future as well. Stories can be passed down, of our queen, our beavers, polar bears, moose, all things that in 100 years young people may not remember. Even now, money is disappearing. The penny, once an important part of our currency, now insignificant. Nowadays, everything is becoming digital, in 100 years, money could become completely technological; debit and credit could take over our lives. Finding these things could improve their knowledge of the past, and by asking their families, they could learn so much more.

Selecting favourite novels to be placed in the capsule would be a relevant addition. Literature changes everyday, and it would be good for the future to see what was popular to the Canadian’s of today. This would give the future an idea of what was used as entertainment for some, and knowledge for others. Also, could give the residents of Canada an image of how much literature has changed throughout the years. In 100 years, anything could change, and sense even now, physical books are slowly disappearing and becoming digital, who knows where the future will lead. I think the history of what our popular novels are now, would be a particularly interesting addition to the time capsule, especially for those literature fanatics, who find beauty in a paperback copy.

Adding a photograph of a common Canadian activity like, hunting, fishing, hockey, etc. would be an important aspect of our lives to share with the men and women in 100 years. Pastimes throughout history change drastically, so to inform the future residents of what we, as Canadians did in the past, would be something that would interest anyone in the future. Another option for the photograph, would be one portraying a Canadian landscape. For instance, the Hopewell Rocks would be an interesting choice. With the world changing everyday, and erosion being a major problem, we cannot be certain that these fascinating tourist attractions will still exist. We need to share these parts of our lives with the future of Canada.

It is my assumption that all of these seemingly irrelevant parts of Canadian lives today, will be the history of our inevitable fate. I believe that these items should be taken under great consideration, and pondered of their importance to this capsule.


Letter:

Dear future residents of Canada,

I am writing to you from the year 2016. My name is Gina, I am a 16 year old resident of Blackville, New Brunswick. Alongside my mother, father, and two brothers, I am proud to call Canada my home, even when things become questionable. Today, I am writing in hopes that you will take the time to remember us, “people from the past” even for a moment.

You may have heard stories, about the generation that could not survive without technology. However, I want to tell you, that we were not all hopeless. In our time on earth, we did amazing things, as well as things we aren’t so proud of. Gender equality is still something we’re working on, but we’ve come a long way. Same sex marriage has become legal in the United States, which was a huge step in equality. I can only hope, in your time on earth, you never have to worry about whether you are being treated equal to others, based on your gender identity, sexuality, or race. Although, as of now, in the year 2016, we are still struggling against this notion. There have been more deaths in our generation from suicide, and racial, as well as sexualism attacks, than there have been ever in history.

Technology can be the cause of many great things if used properly, but you need to be cautious of the harm it can do also. In our time, terrifying things have happened. One event that still haunts the minds of our parents, like 9/11. As well, events that are still fresh in the minds of the young, like terrorist attacks all over the world: Paris, Brussels, and even shootings everywhere, including ones in our own nation. I want to warn you, having this connection to technology is the best, and worst thing that has happened to this generation. With this, we can spread a word around the world in a second, we can get people from other continents involved in things that do not even affect them, and we can even develop things to help you, the people of the future.

If it was not for us, the planets that make up our solar system would remain unknown to many. We have built robots, and droids that can travel far distances, and teach of the greatest part of our generation: discovery. In July of 2015, our farthest planet was visited by these inventions. With this, Pluto has been given a new face. Although, if it was not for us, I hope you would have never known who a man named Donald Trump is. I am uncertain whether you will be in chaos because of this knowledge, or oblivious to the things that could have happened. With this technology we created, a man who believed he could “make America great again” was given his shot in the spotlight. As a result, cultures have been offended, even shamed, and men and women of every perspective have been taunted by this new judgement.

You may wonder about all the amazing things that occurred in our time. Sadly, I do not have the writing capacity to inform you of it all. Yet, if you look around you, at all the hopefully astonishing inventions that the people of your time created, maybe you can understand that although we were a generation engulfed in technology, that is not always a bad thing.

                                                                                                                       Yours truly, 

Gina, from the past

Sanchez The Slug

1. Sanchez was a cheerful slug.

2. While his parents worked in the gardens during the day, he would spend his time with his friends at the ant hill.

3. Sometimes, Sanchez would race with his Ant friends, Anthony and Antonia. It was one of his favourite things to do.

4. Although, keeping up with his friends was not always easy for the young slug.

5. They would move faster than a racehorse, with 20 times their own weight on their backs.

6. Yet, Sanchez could barely move a meter within 20 seconds.

7. After yet another extreme loss, he headed home for the evening, thinking about why he could not win.

8. “Why can’t I run?” he thought.

9. As he continued to crawl home, he passed Buck, the butterfly. As he watched him flutter beautifully, Sanchez wondered,

10. “Why can’t I fly?” and he kept on.

11. That day, Sanchez had had enough of the embarrassment.

12. “Dad, why can't I run as fast as the ants? Or fly as beautifully as the butterflies? Why can’t I do anything!”

13.  “Sanchez, my sweet boy, because you cannot.” his father answered.

14. “But my friends can!” he argued.

15. “Your friends are ants, and butterflies. They are built differently than you. With six legs, muscular bodies, made for heavy lifting, speed and flight, you are not made for that.” explained his father.

16. Sanchez cried out, “Why can’t I do that? I want to do that too! I can’t do anything!”

17. Surprised, his father continued, “Darling, ants and butterflies are made to do fantastic things, but so are you.”

18. “Huh?” he questioned.

19. His father began, “Without you, the gardens to the west would not exist! Us slugs break things down, and reuse what is helpful for the plants. If you didn’t do the job you do, the soil would not be healthy, and the flowers would not bloom!”

20. Sanchez was happy with this. He may not have had the strength of an ant, or flight of a butterfly, but he has his own unique talents.

21. Later that night, he would call his friends. Together, they would head west.

Tips on Writing Stories for Children

After reading articles on tips for writing children stories, there was a lot of information I found helpful. Particularly, I found the tips provided under "Story Structure" most informative. It helped me to understand the areas I should look more closely into before creating a story for children. How to alternate between scenes, as well as ways to cut narration short, were all things that made my understanding of the topic more advanced. In the section involving "Style and Tone" the author of the article explained how you must be quick, and short in your sentencing. Children are easily bored, and in order to keep their attention at hand, you must be simple with your words, but full of movement. This made me get a better idea on the style of story I should create.


Similar to my previous blog post on "Analyzing Children Stories", the article talks a lot about characterizing, and theme. It talked of being descriptive of your character, but doing it in a way that develops dialogue.  Rather than coming out and saying, as a narrator: "Ashley has purple hair", you can simply have a character state: "I like your purple hair, Ashley!".  Also, the author speaks of the theme, and ways to portray it, without coming right out and saying it. They explained how to allow your theme to come out through the plot, and development, of the story.


Information that I found helpful in the "Writing Good Dialogue" article would be the three points that one should aim for in dialogue:

1. Reveal characters’ relationships to one another. 
2. Move the story forward. 
3. Increase the tension.

I found these helpful for when I move on to creating dialogue. You do not want to create unnecessary information, or confusion, with speech that does not add to the plot of your story. Also, the article was effective in providing examples, and ideas of how to use these tips in our own stories. With this article, you can do all of this efficiently.


To me, assessing this particular assignment should involve creativity and inventiveness. When creating a children's story, you want to be as creative as possible. Children have wild minds, they will believe, or be entertained by almost anything. Yet, stories that follow usual boys or girls are not as attention catching as one about, say a hedgehog and his sister. This should be added to our rubric.

Analyzing Children Stories

For this assignment I chose three different children's stories to analyze.  I chose "The Little Gingerbread Man" by Carol Moore, "The Invisible Alligators" by Hayes Roberts, and "The Wiener Dog Magnet" by Hayes Roberts.

The first, "The Little Gingerbread Man" is a story that follows the adventure of "the gingerbread man".  He was half the size of all the other gingerbread men that were made in the same batch as him, that day.  Yet, he was the only one who could run.  There was plenty dialogue in the story, mainly between the gingerbread man, his friend the butterfly, and all of his predators.  In the dialogue it is explained of how the gingerbread man feels, as well as how his predators feel about him: they want to eat him.  This helps to add to the conflict of the story, and how being a delicious gingerbread man is dangerous.  Running away from the ones who wish to eat him is the conflict this "man" faces.  Also, he struggles to trust his savior, and friend, the butterfly, throughout the story, fearing that she too wanted to eat him.  Young children would easily understand this situation, especially if they themselves love gingerbread.  They are able to comprehend how tasty one would think a gingerbread is, and how he would be in danger.  To resolve the conflict, the gingerbread man must place his trust in the wings of his friend, the butterfly.  After almost being eaten he is rescued by his friend, carried to safety; teaching the children the lesson of friendship and trust.  In the end, the butterfly's intentions were good, leading the gingerbread man to a happy ending.

Next, I read "The Invisible Alligators".  The main character is a young, orange, monkey named Sari, with huge eyes.  There is dialogue between Sari, and the invisible alligators.  It follows the plot, and how the alligators are causing trouble for not only her, but many others.  Best of all, the dialogue expresses the main idea best.  As the alligators make issues for everyone, they also teach them a lesson in one way, or another.  Sari is conflicted as to why things are going wrong in her house.  Her homework ruined, toys cover her staircase, her llamas scattered, the invisible alligators have caused it all.  I believe it is a fun conflict that children will understand in a way.  The comical aspect will make it intriguing to young kids.  As well, if they maybe have siblings, or pets, who seem to ruin everything, then they can comprehend the frustration Sari feels.  To resolve the conflict, Sari follows the invisible alligators into their lair to examine the damage they do.  Afterwards, she remains confused as to why they do this, but as she heads home, it is clear that a lesson has been taught.  The message was to teach responsibility to Sari.  If she left her toy castle out at night, it was broken; her toys covered the staircase, teaching her to pick them up.  In the end, she would know to clean up her messes, and learn how to handle tough situations.

Finally, "The Wiener Dog Magnet" follows Kiki Marie, the monkey.  There is no dialogue in this story, just narration.  Kiki Marie purchased a magnet, that was shaped like a wiener dog, only to later be conflicted with the fact that her "wiener dog magnet" had actually magnetized to real wiener dogs.  Afterwards, spotting two alligators who are stranded in the water, Kiki Marie becomes conflicted about how to help. I think the conflict of being excited about something, then having it turn bad, is a conflict that young children of any age, could understand.  They could relate if they had a toy themselves that may have broken not long after they got it.  To resolve the conflict of the alligators, Kiki Marie uses her wiener dog magnet to build a bridge and save the day.  It teaches the children that even when things appear they have gone wrong, there is always a way to fix them.

The three stories are similar in characters.  Though they are not all the same non-human character, they are all not human.  This is helpful to catch the children's attention with talking animals, and gingerbread men.  Also, they compare with the resolving conflicts.  Things seem to be the worse they could be for the character, but later, they realize the solution is simple.  Some differences in the stories is how accepting the characters are.  In the first, and last stories, the characters learn to accept the way things are.  Yet, in the second story, the main character does not understand, and refuses to accept the idea that things will work out for the best.

I believe these stories would be appealing to young children in many ways.  In the first story, the idea of a talking, and running, gingerbread man, with a butterfly sidekick, is hilarious.  Also, this gingerbread was different than the rest, being smaller in size.  Yet, he had his own abilities that are extraordinary, that the others did not.  It captures the child's interest if they themselves feel different than others their age.  As well, in the second, the story provides the children with an unrealistic idea of "invisible alligators" under their bed.  It may scare some, but for others, they may be provided with a theory for all the things that go wrong in their lives.  The final story shows a young monkey with a favourite toy.  This would be appealing to children because most do have a toy they love best of all.  Like the monkey, they would carry it around everywhere, and do everything with it.  So, they can relate well, causing a growing interest in the story.

This is Your Cup of Tea

Like tea? Love it? Or maybe you just need a "pick me up" that is slightly healthier for you than the high doses of caffeine given to you from ordinary coffee? It can be great, but also a difficult task to master. So, if complicated isn’t really your cup of tea, I’m here to help.



The process:

Step one:

To begin, you must select your favourite flavour of tea. Some beneficial flavours include: Green tea (skin,shrinks fat), Chai tea (improves digestion), or even Peppermint tea (bad breath, reduces pain). If your tea is prepackaged, you can move on to the next step. If you use dry tea leaves, then extra steps must be taken.



https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tea

Step two: 

Next, you need to prepare your water. If you are a “hot tea” drinker, then boiling your water before hand is the way to go. You can use a kettle, or even just a regular pot (though precautions must be taken as this is a more dangerous method). Fill your kettle or pot with desired amount of water and place on stove. Set on High for 10 minutes (times may vary depending on type of stove). Once it boils, allow your water to simmer for a few minutes.



http://www.cuisineandhealth.com/never-overheat-the-water-twice-heres-why/

Step three: 

After that is complete, you can begin the ending processes of your tea. Grab your favourite mug, with tea bag inside and set aside as you will need it in this step. Take your kettle/pot (use oven mitts or cloth for safety as object will be hot), pour the water from inside into your selected mug.



http://jimscherer.com/portfolio/pouring-tea/

Step four: 

Finally, you should allow your tea some time to cool before drinking as you may burn yourself. Once that is complete, and your tea has steeped, you may enjoy your delicious, fresh cup of tea!



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Tea can be a very beneficial drink to many. It is a healthy alternative to other caffeinated drinks; diet friendly; an antioxidant. There can be safety issues in this process, involving burn risks, as well, if you have an allergy to most teas, this may not be for you.



Extras:
For dry tea leaves:


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Tea Bag/Filter Method: 

You can purchase empty tea bags/tea filters at many locations, (i.e. Teavana, David’s Tea, Walmart). Majority of the time, there will be a opening where you can easily pour your leaves in, (for subtle flavour add leaves sparsely; for more intense flavour add plenty). Once your tea is in, you can tighten the sac, or place on the cover, and use as usual.


http://www.banggood.com/Mr-Tea-Infuser-Silicone-Herbal-Tea-Strainer-Filter-p-932820.html


Steeping Method: 

If you are more the type to allow your tea to steep for several minutes before drinking; removing the bag/leaves, then a Perfectea Maker is what you want, (purchased at Teavana). You simply place your leaves inside, pour boiling or cold water (depending on the type of tea you want) over top; close the lid; then, after several minutes you can place the Perfectea Maker above your cup, and set it there. The internal filter holds back the leaves as the bottom of the object allows the tea to pass through, into the cup.



For Iced Tea:
Follow the above steps, only pouring water over top of ice, placed in your glass, rather than not.

http://www.popsugar.com/fitness/Man-Experiences-Kidney-Failure-From-Iced-Tea-37204684
For more information visit:
http://www.teavana.com/
https://www.davidstea.com/
http://www.itoen.com/preparing-tea

"How To Make Lipstick Out of Crayons" Review

For this assignment I chose to inspect a "How to Make Lipstick Out of Crayons" article.  Some characteristics that make it a good how to article are the constant safety reminders that the writer provides its readers with.  That is something that I see as essential when explaining situations to others.  It is important to be aware of the risks, as well as the benefits.  Another aspect of the article that makes it well written is the ability to be descriptive and brief.  The author is able to provide as much information as possible, in only a few short steps.  This is especially important to those who may not have the time to read through pages and pages of information, for a simple task.  When explaining "How To" you do not want to confuse your readers with pointless phrases that may not be necessary for your overall result.  I believe this article was very efficient in doing so.  Finally, they gave extra resources for information, like a how to video, and tips at the end.

I felt this article was well written because as a reader, I found it easy to understand, to a point that I could probably do it on my own.  It was so well written that I find you could read it over once, and then never again.  You would not need to have the "How To" opened in order to preform the task, you could retain enough information afterwards that you would be able to do it efficiently.  Although this article was very informative, and well written, there are always things that could be improved.  Some of these things that I believe could be looked at in this situation include: possibly providing a list of manufacturers that produce some of the ingredients.  For instance, non-toxic crayons, where you can purchase extracts and essences, etc.  As a teenager, I am not well informed of the majority of this information, so it would be helpful to me in this case.  Also, it could be looked to, for the interest aspect, to create a more "catching" statement, or even why would we want to do this?  What benefits does it provide?  Overall, the issues with the article are all very simple fixes.

Rubric:

There are no more than three grammatical or spelling errors in the article: 5
The article has a catchy headline that makes you want to read it: 3
The article has a purpose, explaining benefits to the reader: 4
The steps in the article are clear and easy to understand: 5

In the end I give the article found at: http://www.wikihow.com/Make-Lipstick-Out-of-Crayons , a solid 17/20.  It was grammatically correct in most cases, and clear to understand, but it lacked in interest, and the beneficial elements of this process were unclear.

Another statement I think should be added to the rubric is: "Did the author provide additional resources for the information provided? (ex. videos, tips, other articles, etc.) "

Insane Intentions

"Finding Forrester" Film Review

Produced in 2000, “Finding Forrester” is a Columbia Pictures film. With director, Gus Van Sant, and actors like the three time Golden Globe winner, Sean Connery, and, Rob Brown. Along with a few astounding supporting actors like Anna Paquin, Matt Damon, and F. Murray Abraham, this film is booming with exciting talent. Enjoying the discovery involved in the story, of how a single person must decide their own fate, and the gift of friendship is one of the most outstanding characteristics the story contains. Subsequently making 80 million dollars in box office prices, I think it is clear that “Finding Forrester” is one, entertaining experience.

Our movie begins with a promising sixteen year old, with a passion for basketball. For this character, Jamal Wallace (Rob Brown), decisions are everything. Living in the Bronx can be a dangerous thing when you are a man of colour, and when trying to uphold a certain expectation from his friends, these obstacles become even more severe. Once he notices a man watching him from above, in an apartment window, with his friend’s praise, he steps into the man’s apartment. Something that may have seemed like an ordinary living space to anyone else, nevertheless, soon became a sanctuary for Jamal. Finally, he finds someone to share his private life of writing with, and, for this mysterious recluse, someone to remove him from his state of privacy. Upon developing an unlikely friendship with “The Window” (Sean Connery), this young man accepts a placement in a private school, better suited to his literary skills. After his acceptance, things take an unexpected turn in Jamal’s life once he realizes his new “friend” is infact a former novelist named William Forrester.

We all remember the classic novel “To Kill A Mockingbird”. In many ways, “Finding Forrester” can be, as itself, a mockingbird. During the film, each protagonist struggles with himself; whether it be Jamal’s obstacle of choosing between his passion for writing, or basketball; or William’s conflict with reality. Both “To Kill A Mockingbird” and “Finding Forrester” have these aspects of self discovery along the path of development. Similar to characters like Boo Radley (To Kill A Mockingbird), William finds comfort within himself, however, later realizes his growing affection towards simple facets of the outside world. When we compare Jamal Wallace to the characters Scout, Jem, or even, Dill,we can see obvious similarities. Each of these characters attempt to understand the ways of others, whether it be the ways of adults, as Jamal struggles to understand Professor Crawford’s standing, or even just how social status compares in society. Both stories share a theme of judgement in the sense that it is difficult for others to believe Jamal is an outstanding writer, based solely on the colour of his skin, just as it is difficult for the jury to see Tom Robinson (To Kill A Mockingbird) as innocent. With these two stories, the comparisons are endless, and each alike, were fascinating pieces of art.

Although the film’s message remains clear, it possesses extraordinary leads, and supporting actors, the story also has it’s downfalls. In my own opinion, the soundtrack chosen for this movie was quite well thought out. The musical collections of Miles Davis with Lonely Fire, and Vonetta really capture the character of William Forrester. He can be silent and introverted, still, has a loneliness to him. Soothing sounds throughout the film are used excellently in his presence, however, these songs fail to shine any light onto Rob Brown’s character. They are sweet and sound, like the wind, yet Jamal is a man of loud thoughts, and provoking attitude that is actually used beautifully in the story, although lacks in the sounds. Even though the story is one of expert composition, it as well, was very predictable. As many films are, the outcome in the end is always something of what we expect in the beginning, (e.g. boy gets the girl; the athlete wins the championship; etc.), however, “Finding Forrester” did have it’s ways of shocking its audience. The finale is something that can be only described as suiting to it’s plot, though fascinating all the same. It leaves its viewers speechless in awe, yet satisfied. Clearly the acting was phenomenal, with impacting quotes like “ You must write your first draft with your heart….The first key to writing is... to write, not to think!”, and “We walk away from our dreams afraid we may fail, or worse yet, afraid we may succeed.” the audience is in complete astonishment at what is taking place before their mundane eyes, for all 2 hours and 16 minutes.

When watching this film, you get a feeling of unity. As a literature fanatic, this film is an extremely enjoyable story with a plot that will capture your attention in diverse ways. With a theme of friendship, and social minority, “Finding Forrester” reaches out to everyone it can. Showing how the power of friendship, and coming together as one, can do amazing things. Between developing friendships with the most unlikely of characters, and showing the world how opposites really do attract, the plot gives its viewers something to chew on in the aftermath. Personally, I believe that the producers of “Finding Forrester” really knew what they were doing; conveying the message perfectly to it’s viewers, in a way even a child could comprehend.

If you take pride in the art of literature, or if you are at that crossroad in your life where decisions are everything, this is the movie for you. Jamal’s challenge to remain connected to his past life, and still thrive in writing, will make anyone nostalgic. Thinking of a time you faced, or are facing, where you need to choose between the ones you love, and the thing you love to do. If you cannot find a connection to Rob Brown’s character, than odds are you are the Sean Connery of this story. Everyone can compare their personal experiences in some way. Whether it be Jamal, William, or even Professor Crawford, there is something in this film for every distinct personality.

The Fault in Our Film Review

The film review I read was on The Fault In Our Stars, by James Berardinelli. The movie was based off of the best selling YA novel by John Green that, even after watching the film at least 3 times, was still an outstanding interpretation of the book.  This review did give it's readers a decent understanding of the film, with few difficulties that may have caused "spoilers".

Through out his review, James very successfully states the plot of the film, without giving away too much information. As well, he accurately describes the important characteristics of each character, while giving the reader a well preserved idea of the actors.  He states that calling the film " a 'teenage cancer romance' is an understatement of the film's laudable qualities" which I agree is an excellent point.  He puts his own opinions of the story into his review, without sounding biased, which I believe is a extraordinarily important aspect of an effective movie review.

Avoiding giving away too much information regarding the plot of the film is an important part of a movie review.  For most, when you read a review of a movie, you are only reading it to get an overall idea of how well produced, or interesting the film is.  If you give away all the details in your review, then whoever has read it, will begin to see absolutely zero reason to actually take the time to watch the movie.  They will feel like they have already seen it, and that is not what you want in a well written review.  That is not the point of a review, you just want to readers to have a good understanding of the films qualities, not the whole film itself.

Taking the time, in a review, to explain the characters effectively, is another critical aspect of a film review.  You want your readers to understand the quality of acting, as well as how well the characters were produced.  Especially in a review, that has been written about a novel based movie, you want to satisfy the books readers, by providing them an idea of how strong the actors portrayed their characters.  For me, I found that the review written by James gave a decent idea of the characters.  He did not state too much involving the acting, except that is was "top-notch".

My favourite genre of film would be thriller, or science fiction.  I enjoy these types of films because they provide me with a feeling of suspense, as well as allowing me to explore some creative worlds and ideas.  If I could write a movie review on any film, I would choose to write one on the movie "Angus, Thongs, And Perfect Snogging" because it is one movie that I found I enjoyed a lot, while still being able to give a critical response also.  The film is one that I have watched countless times, so I believe I could write a very effective, well summarized, review for it.

http://www.reelviews.net/reelviews/fault-in-our-stars-the

On The Curb

The smell of gasoline fills my nose as cars race past me, none stopping to console me and my fears. Abandonment is all I feel, the fear of possibility creeping in. Our neighbours have just mowed their lawn, and the sour scent of the fresh blades overthrows my senses as I wait. What am I waiting for? Someone to stop as they scuff by on the pavement in their “fancy attire”, trying to conceal their true upbringing? Trying to flee from their past? Hands running through my sweat slicked hair as the sun beams against my back. Frustration over takes me, I know what has and will happen.




Why am I still sitting here, listening to the lives of those who currently feel alive? Like my whole world hasn’t just crumbled right under their noses? As if life is a beautiful thing that should be celebrated? My emotions control me, and I don’t have the strength to fight back. Urging to lash out, and shout at them, and tell them that what happened here isn’t something to push past as if it was nothing. Situations like this affect this community far too often. My whole body, engulfed in paralysis, as I sit on the curb. The presence of the rugged cement beneath me, digging into my tailbone more and more with each passing second. When will it end? If it ever does, this numbness, emotion, all becoming who I am in this moment. It is as if I have been injected with temporary anesthesia, only I feel nothing, and everything, at the same time. Should I turn back? Back to that fluorescently lit place where I swore I would never return? To the one who once led me to believe held the whole world upon their shoulders?




This mid-summer heat is becoming too much to handle, but still I remain under its rays. That man of whom once possessed the entire globe, has now smashed it upon myself. How could this happen? How could this happen to me? To us? We were always good people, or so we thought. Never absent from church on Sundays, and remained involved in community activities, if only he would’ve listened. It didn’t have to end like this, he didn’t have to give into those malevolent demons. And now? Just another statistic of teens who grew up in the suburbs. How this ends is undeniable, I will walk into that room, tinged with guilt and grief, and what will I see? The hollow shell of the boy that previously possessed eyes that gleamed, full of ideas, plans, aspirations, the one I used to know, the one who I once called my best friend.




It seems like ages ago. Before the accident, the blood, the drugs… All things that have destroyed our lives. Why couldn’t he listen? Him, the boy with plans, the one who always had problems against authority. Where did that get him? No where but attached to hundreds of machines, tubes fishing in and out from underneath his gown, attempting to savor what little life he has left in him. This fact causes me to use every ounce of motive in my body to restrain from screaming. I wrap my hands through my hair once again, caving in on myself, trying to gain even a little control. My shoulders shudder with the effort.


In the end, I give up, alone now. With quivering hands, this is probably best for us all. Cars have neglected the street, and families have returned to their own shreds of perfection. I succumb to my emotions, and allow myself to go temporarily insane. Watching my shadow as it shifts positions every so often, I hope. That is all I can do at this moment, that and pull myself back together, piece by piece, until I can ever so slightly call myself whole once again.

Writing Inventory Reflection

During days in which I spend the majority of my time alone, often I write entries in a journal. I enjoy expressing my thoughts on topics, as well as simple opinions of my day. When I write, similar to when I pass my time reading, I can escape the real world for a little while. As well, like writing and reading, I can be found participating in school activities involving student council, and drama club also. These extra curriculars I frequently take pride in are simple ways that I pass my time joyfully.


My favourite authors could range from writers like John Green, and Veronica Roth, to Stephen King, and James Dashner. I prefer novels based on fantasy, with a futuristic style, as well as something with action involved. Although, reading romantic stories is also something I enjoy, I will only read this style if there is some sort of relevant plot to it. These different types are some of my favourites because they can get my heart beat to race, as well as capture my attention with details.



The form of writing that comes more easily to me would have to be narrative, descriptive, or formal writing. I tend to use an extended vocabulary when I write, so formal and descriptive writing are easily obtainable for me. Also, narrative writing can be simple for me in the case that I have a story to tell that I understand completely. In my opinion, descriptive and narrative require much more brainstorming compared to formal writing in my understanding. A more challenging form of writing for me would be essay writing. Attempting to plot out all of my ideas in a brief amount of time does not come as naturally to me. Knowing that I am limited in a time frame stresses me out far too much for me to complete a well written essay.



When I write I primarily get my ideas from my everyday life, or my opinions/feelings on topics. I use writing as a form of expressing myself clearly, so it is necessary for me to use my own life experiences to create pieces, unless I have a clear understanding of the topic so that I am able to give my personal views of it.



On my private time I constantly am writing in my journal. It is not the kind of journal in which I discuss my life or anything of that sorts, but I frequently take concepts I do not comprehend and create my understanding on the paper. I use my writing to create ideas, and for my own personal understanding/expression. Currently I have been writing a series of excerpts involving the actions of people, and the way we handle certain situations. It is something that interests me immensely!




A piece of writing I have done in my life that I am especially proud of would have to be the essay I created in eighth grade about my oldest brother’s graduation. It was a story full of excitement and emotion for both my family and friends, for him to become a high school graduate as an non-verbal, Autistic child. That was one of my favourite stories to write, and my teacher at the time even had asked permission to send it into a Autism Awareness website that publishes people’s personal stories involving Autism. I do not believe it ever got published, but the fact that it was even seen as eligible for the cause is what matters most.




If my assignment for school is given an especially long due date, usually I will produce at least two draft copies before finalizing my ideas. It gives me opportunity to improve my writing even more than completing only one draft does. I prefer to check over my work markedly in order to create well thought out ideas. I am frequently told that my writing is full of voice, and description. When writing I put as much thought into the voice and way I am describing my ideas as I do the main idea of the story. I believe some of my weaknesses as a writer include sentence structure, and my ability to avoid sentence fragments, as well as abbreviations in formal writing.




If I had to choose a topic that I enjoy writing about most it would have to be anything involving my family, or other topics I have abundant knowledge of. Some things to do with my opinions are also things I find more interesting, for me, to create. As a writer this semester, my hope is to improve on my sentence structure, and ability to plot out my ideas more efficiently. I expect that this course should help me to improve in all of these areas, especially ones involving quick thinking.